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一诗质疑

2016-01-08 17:55:54| 分类：杂谈 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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小孙女放学回来，高兴地说老师今天教了一首诗：“天地一笼统，井口一窟窿，黑狗身上白，白狗身上肿。”

这首诗写的是下雪。是仿照唐人张打油的《咏雪》：“江上一笼统，井上黑窟窿。黄狗身上白，白狗身上肿”。

诗的前两句很自然合情合理，后两句就值得推敲，这狗是活狗还是死狗？如果是活狗，雪下在狗身上，或则被走动抖落，或则被狗身上的热度溶化，残留在身上的不会太多，会不会形成“黑狗身上白，白狗身上肿”的审美效果？

诗人写诗想当然，后人读诗不思考，教师是不是会引导孩子们质疑？

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